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I really like how this whole piece is organized. The verse is dope too. You remind me of someone who's name is escaping me right now. I know most artists don't like to hear that 😂. I really like note #5. I didn't think about how rich men like to infantilize people & make themselves patriarchal perverts.

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Thank you Chandra 🙏🏽☺️, I really respect your heart and mind. I appreciate you dropping a line. And when you remember, please let me know! lol on Footnote 5, yeah yo, they be trying to straight up son people and act like that ain’t what they doing lol My first job out of undergrad and our supervisor would like to shush us when we was in a group meeting, I was like what the heck! lol

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Shush folks?? Nope. That's a no-no! 😂 As soon as I think of the rapper, I'll be sure to let you know.

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Yeah, smh, lol sounds good 🙏🏽

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Dope piece man. Appreciate the shoutout and digging the way you're weaving in real life, hip-hop and comic books similar to old-school Ta-Nehisi Coates. The footnotes is also a great post-modern touch 👌🏾

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Thank you John! I appreciate you taking the time to listen and sit with my work. thanks for giving the space and time to engage too. I got another joint that I wrote years ago that inspired the concept. I’ll share with you 👍🏽

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This is great!!

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🙏🏽💚, thank you! Thank your for taking the time.

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Very nice! I the multimedia approach is good. The audio, the images, the references, all great!

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Josh, thank you so much for taking the time to listen and I really appreciate your feedback on the audio quality 🙏🏽. I have another piece that I wrote years ago that ties to this one too, i’m about halfway through your recent post where you were talking about November 11 Veterans Day andArmistice Day. Very insightful stuff and I think there is some beautiful overlap. I’ll try and either share here soon or just send you a draft and some notes on what I’m thinking.

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Thanks! I'm a big believer in just posting things, even half baked ideas :) You'll get some comments from people you didn't expect. But yes, I will very happy to read it!

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Appreciate the encouragement! 🙏🏽💚 and thanks again for dropping by.

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fire piece bro...witty but still kinda kind hearted

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Thanks bro 🙏🏽💚, I appreciate you tuning in. On the kind hearted part, thanks fam. I think compassion for trauma wounds is important—even if you still got to use your sword on these fancy clowns. I like the light hearted tone despite all the pain ect. Again, thanks 🙏🏽

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